I need to fix the eyes, well if i made her naked you will see that the legs arent conected with the upper part of the boddy XD, she will look like a cute Krang robot from TMNT hahaha
I thought it was pretty good. i think the last panel would be more effective if like his eyes were swirls or something. I see you had his one eye bloodshot, but i figure if thats your punchline panel, it woulda been nice to have it be a little less subtle.
i like the color palette in particular. Like compared to the top half of the board, everything below her chin feels like its not as sharp or tighted up like the top part. That wouldnt be a bad thing if the whole design was like that, but because its sharp and resolved up at the top, the bottom feels like it needs that refinement. Like you can see the sketchy lines and stuff.
Pretty cool for an hour excersize, i think my only critcism would be that i wish the outline of the body had a dark outline like the rest of the figure. Feels like it needs it in order to push itself in front of the brick wall area. Also i wish for color but yea! Thanks!
Shit I didn't even think of doing that to the shirt... I was rushing!!
I considered color but I have no coloring tools here, I could have put it on a program like Photoshop and colored it on there I guess... It's just difficult as I'm color blind.
Anyway, thanks for checking it out... Maybe I'll make a different one some time, or touch this one up a bit. :)
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Rated 4.5 / 5 stars May 2, 2011
Informative
i can totally see McCain making that :P face
Rated 3.5 / 5 stars May 1, 2011
good stuff
The proportions feel pretty good. Would be good to see em in colour
I would color it, but i dont have a tablet!
Rated 4.5 / 5 stars Mar 6, 2011
Sexy
Would it be possible to make a naked version of this?
Just curious. I found that her eyes were too glassy thatd be my only thing i guess
I need to fix the eyes, well if i made her naked you will see that the legs arent conected with the upper part of the boddy XD, she will look like a cute Krang robot from TMNT hahaha
Rated 4.5 / 5 stars Feb 17, 2011
Good start
I thought it was pretty good. i think the last panel would be more effective if like his eyes were swirls or something. I see you had his one eye bloodshot, but i figure if thats your punchline panel, it woulda been nice to have it be a little less subtle.
Lookin forward to future panels
WOAH, TWO newgrounds celebrates rated my comic - and such generous ratings too!
You have a point about the swirls, I just like draw bloodshot eyes.
Rated 4.5 / 5 stars Feb 17, 2011
You are handsome
i like your little guitar
square you very much sir. that tiny guitar makes tiny songs.
Rated 4.5 / 5 stars Feb 9, 2011
nice design
i like the color palette in particular. Like compared to the top half of the board, everything below her chin feels like its not as sharp or tighted up like the top part. That wouldnt be a bad thing if the whole design was like that, but because its sharp and resolved up at the top, the bottom feels like it needs that refinement. Like you can see the sketchy lines and stuff.
Rated 5 / 5 stars Jan 19, 2011
This is great
I love the zipper detail. I want my ashes stuffed in it when i die...
Rated 4.5 / 5 stars Dec 1, 2010
a classic
I hope this is one of a series of portraits.
I could see these hanging in a museum or atleast my living room. It'd be a good conversation piece.
I think the lighting is a bit off in places. thats probably my only criticism atm
Rated 3.5 / 5 stars Dec 1, 2010
Hello
Pretty cool for an hour excersize, i think my only critcism would be that i wish the outline of the body had a dark outline like the rest of the figure. Feels like it needs it in order to push itself in front of the brick wall area. Also i wish for color but yea! Thanks!
Shit I didn't even think of doing that to the shirt... I was rushing!!
I considered color but I have no coloring tools here, I could have put it on a program like Photoshop and colored it on there I guess... It's just difficult as I'm color blind.
Anyway, thanks for checking it out... Maybe I'll make a different one some time, or touch this one up a bit. :)
Rated 5 / 5 stars Nov 1, 2010
Full size is a must
Really incredible details. Definately view at full size. I love the ghoulish take on him. Its refreshing