Score: 8

"crude yet very stylish im confused"

submission: a lovely day

date: May 1, 2003

This animation was a good example of how something can be crudely drawn and unpolished and still be good in its own right. Good choice of music and overall good concept. I guess the only thing that i would desire would be something a little longer. With something not as detailed as this you can really afford to put another couple days and really add to the substance without losing alot of sleep. Overall good little flick and worth the viewing, continue with this style its quite refreshing.

Luis

Score: 8

"fun to watch"

submission: Blast Bros. Intro Anim.

date: July 23, 2001

It was pretty entertaining to watch the rythm is nice and quick like the background music that it is paired with. The animation is pretty sharp and fluid. If i had to be picky id say to treat every scene with the same amount of care. There's some scenes which are just beautifully drawn and animated and theres others that just dont feel up to par with what you've set me up for in quality and its a little disconcerting. Youve got pretty good drawing skills and so i think its just a matter of putting extra time to making sure all parts of the movie are up to the level of quality that youve developed. Otherwise good job.

Luis

Score: 8

"Wicked and fun"

submission: Dead Baby Dressup 3

date: May 24, 2001

Ive never played any of the other db dressups but this one was quite good, lots of choices keeps things interesting and the graphics are fresh and well drawn. If i had to be picky maybe you could organize things a little better now that your dealing with so many things, it starts to get a little too crammed and crowded sifting through all those objects, maybe you could split it up into bins with categories so that upon clicking it the assortment would change according to the category you chose from.. (ex. legs bin, arms bin,etc) speakin of arms coulda used a couple more arms to play around with. Overall good job.
Luis

Score: 9

"nice series"

submission: College University pt 2

date: May 18, 2001

I must say i was pleasantly surprised by how long the clip turned out to be. Anyways good characters, dialogue was good, the lip syncing was sharp and the pacing was good. From an optimizing standpoint you could probably do away with going over board on gradients on some instances. For example during the driving scene where they are listening to music.. you could get away with not using gradients on the trees passing by... itll bump down your file size some. Also work on making your backgrounds as strong as your characters at some points they seemed neglected. Good job and keep em coming

Luis

Score: 8

"niccce"

submission: kegel & enrique iglesias

date: May 18, 2001

Good job, it was hilarious. The sound was excellent and the flow was also equally pleasing. If i had to be picky from an animators standpoint id say be very observant of the lip syncing many times you can get away with holding a mouth gesture longer over major sylables rather than trying to animate a mouth movement for every word, otherwise the animation is gonna lag behind the sound all the time, so to counter that you have to disregard tryin to animate minor sylables so that the beginning of a dialog and the end match up exactly with the sound. Anyways enough technical shit. good job

Luis

Score: 8

"dont try this at home"

submission: How to Enlarge your Penis

date: April 27, 2001

well definatley caught me by suprise.. i actually thought it was pretty good.. im always a fan of people that test the limits of flash and obsenity(sp?) and u do that every day edmund.. anyways im gonna go and try and make my dick bigger now..

luis

Score: 9

"refreshing"

submission: [ peas ]

date: April 26, 2001

very different approach to the hole violence in school from what i did but im quite pleased with what i see here its very cynical and cleverly drawn and presented.. and yes that gun sure is well drawn.. excellente job-o... if i had to be picky id say choose a less generic crowd sound.. the one your using is too "crowded room of adults in an auditorium" if that makes any sense.. it doesnt feel like a school atmostphere sound .. but thats minor really.

luis

Score: 9

"sharp stuff"

submission: Scrap Book: Mon vs. Fita

date: April 11, 2001

well, as usual you dont disappoint damian.. good job.. the structure and flow is indeed better than the first.. if i HAD to be picky.. wait time was a little long for a file that size maybe you could get away with preloading less frames or something anyways good job.. you have my 5

Luis