Good work, you actually have a really nice touch, particularly in the lip synching. I think you'll join those ranks in no time. I really enjoyed the subject matter in that you actively address the animation community or what not. Its not something done often and it was kind of refreshing. The actual voicework was a little bit corny, i know the animation is supposed to be silly but maybe the voice made it too much so? I did like the voice of the god and how you resolved that.
Also i hate the font papyrus, but thats a personal thing.