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Hi Clifton,
Good job on the flick, 10 mins is an insane feat in the flash world so I will give you props for treading on unsettled territory. Its refreshing to see people really workin at their stuff. And now on to my criticism.
The animation was great, perspectives were well chosen and interesting and the facial expressions of the characters were also very well done.
Work on the lip synching a little bit.. one of the tough things about going with such a high frame rate is that it gets tougher to decipher where to fake the lip synching. I think you need to work with it some more and figure out when you can hold lip movements out longer than necessary .. right now its just a big jumble of mouth movements and you end up either ahead or behind the actual audio.. a good rule of thumb is to make sure the start and end of a speech is cued at exactly the right point.. drag out the last sylable if needed, remember thats the last movement the viewer sees so you definately do not want to get caught behind or ahead or it'll be very noticeable.
My second suggestion would be to work on your characters a little more.. the animation is great but when they are idle their extremeties seem very stiff and inanimate.. same with the props and furniture.. add a curve here and there even when the furniture is perfectly straight.. it'll feel more inviting and less rigid.
My last criticism would be to not blow your whole wad in one toon.. i think its great that you went after the 10 minute mark but i also think that the toon tended to drag on more than it needed to.. save your tricks and goodies for future episodes.. i liked the channel flipping incident for instance but it becomes forgotten by the end of the film because of something else you introduced such as the three cats.. i forgot all about the owner cause you introduced me to a new plot.. so i mean pay attention to things like that you dont want your toon to have so many different plots going on that people overlook the hard work in the previous set of frames.
I dont hate you on the sound because this is homemade and i am perfectly fine with it being crude. Good job, and i got my eye on you.
-Luis