Luis's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Hard Boiled]

Solid work

This piece is kind of underrated at a 3.5, i thought the voice acting was well done, the storyline was refreshing take of a classic and the angles were pretty engaging.
My one gripe is probably with the typography choice. the yellow italic letters.
They are just too clunky and cliche IMO, The one you used in the title Hard Boiled was fitting. It would have been good to have a nice clean simple font for stuff like microphone productions presents, and save the font with personality for important text like the title of the movie.
Good stuff

[Kitty Krew Opening J]

kitty krew back again.

I enjoyed this and it makes me want to join the kitty krew.

Hulalaoo responds:

lol, i just work in a animation of you :3 (secret)

[Theo]

Good stuff

I actually kind of liked his monotony unlike XBlazeUK, i think his lack of enthusiasm strengthened his lack of touch with the real world (ie the therapy room he was in) He's just kind of rambling even while the place burns.

The lip synchs were a bit off at times and as previously mentioned, a stop at the end of it would have been nice. Some of the shots could have been a little bit stronger. One of my favorite ones was the gum chewing one, maybe if it was a bit tighter of a crop it woulda been more effective. It was like an akward in between looking shot and it looked a bit insecure.

[Reservior Dogs: Mr. Pink]

Fun little short

That was more entertaining than I was originally anticipating it. As others have said, he does blend in well with that scene. The lip synching was a bit off sometimes. Not sure if it was a technical issue with the animation falling behind on the video or if you had your keyframes a few clicks off, but it was off at times which was kinda annoying.
Overall, good job and good choice of movie. I'd be interested to see more of these things. Resevior dogs is one of my favorite movies

devilsgarage responds:

Yeah I did have some technical issues with the sync when I tried to export the finished animation and kept losing out on the audio sync.

Thanks for dropping by and reviewing this, Luis. Much appreciated.

[-Sandwich-]

Fun little short

I liked the bit with the puddle. I think the see-saw part woulda been cool if you did it with an over the shoulder (over-the-bun, if you want to be technical) shot. Like the boy bouncing up and down but you kinda only see a bit of the bun and lettuce in the foreground. The shot you chose was just kinda standard.

Nice work. catchy song and now hungerrrrr.

eddsworld responds:

Yeah, my original idea for that shot was quite bad, it was quite difficult to plan good shots for that part.. should of asked you really xD

[Pencilmation #3]

Fun little short

I think the one suggestion I could give you is that in the beginning when the pencil is erasing, it would be cool if it had a cast shadow also. It just kinda appears and erases stuff but it has no shadow so its kind of disconcerting when the pencil starts drawing and the shadow is back. So I would either have it appear on both or not at all.

I liked the characters and the whole punching himself bit at the beginning was a humorous solution.

[Brawl Funnies [Dick 1]]

I laik video games

This had some clever stuff in it. i dont follow all the video game parodies much, nor do i even play brawl but i find the chars and situations most people animate them to annoying so i was able to relate to it. I think everyones piece worked well, even psi's eyesore.

I like the disco font also.

CoolDrMoney responds:

Abba is a nice one ye

[9 Months Later]

Bawwww

Didnt have to put my personal life on the internet :*(

SkoolCool responds:

The world needed to know.

[Fatherly Bonds]

Muscley

I loved the vintage music.... alot of you guys were sperms back in the golden age of gaming. Anywho great work. i loveTom's facial expressions around the end.

Gonzossm responds:

Lol! I was raised on classic Nes games as a child then leaped over to N64. (Quiet the jump 8-bit to 64bit)

[Pico Wears...]

white boyz cant jump

but they wear cool shoes.