Luis's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Transit]

Really enjoyed it. I think it actually makes for a good final. One entry has alot of dialogue one has none. It'll be interesting how the judges even go about it. I liked the movie, I think it did well interpreting the fork in the road both literally and from a decision making standpoint.

I think I was most suprised by the change in style. Works really well, and I like the tenacity to experiment. I didnt like how the driver driving was rendered. Felt sloppy compared to the seemless walk cycles and floppy feet and other intricacies.

Nice work, I have a special place in my heart for animations driven by purely music. Typography was purtty too.

Emrox responds:

Thanks man! It's good to hear whenever someone picks up on those little details you're proud of.

[I Want Waffles]

I thought it was fun. The ending was cute.

MindChamber responds:

Yay! Thanks

[All Roads (NATA)]

I thought the story was cool and it does relate to elephant in the room i think. I think the elephant being the whole doing what you love vs. what society expects.

I thought the audio worked well and the animation was also good. I appreciate the experimenting but i think you dont need the 3d things. It looks awkward with your style i think. I like the crudeness of your line work and i think the 3d has too much polish for it. Particularly the bit with the coins, i think I woulda appreciated it more if they were just hand drawn and 'imperfect'. Good job, i like that you have no speaking parts. I've always enjoyed that about cartoons and i think its more difficult to get away with. Good luck

Pahgawk responds:

Yeah, I agree. I think I'll stick with 2D for the next one and try to go the opposite route and possibly try to draw frames on paper for a change (assuming I can find a decent way to vectorize them later. I hear Toon Boom is good for that.)

[The Chronicles of F-kun]

what a faggot

Hulalaoo responds:

a cunt

[Shadow of the Animators]

Good work, you actually have a really nice touch, particularly in the lip synching. I think you'll join those ranks in no time. I really enjoyed the subject matter in that you actively address the animation community or what not. Its not something done often and it was kind of refreshing. The actual voicework was a little bit corny, i know the animation is supposed to be silly but maybe the voice made it too much so? I did like the voice of the god and how you resolved that.

Also i hate the font papyrus, but thats a personal thing.

TerminalMontage responds:

Haha, thanks! I used Papyrus font cause that's what the game used! At least, when I googled it that's what someone on some forum said..

And I'm working on my voice acting, I can do decent Meatwad and Satan (from Leo & Satan) impressions, but when it comes to just using my regular voice, I sound too much like I'm "acting" rather than just talking like I would in real life :c

[Best Redesign Ever!]

That was great, its actually how tom sounds in real life, always saying brah and all.

The synching was off at times but spot on at other times, that was my only criticism.
I favorited it.

CheddarMoon responds:

yeah I found the beginning syncing a little bit off before the "Waoh!" part. thanks!

[Luis´s Infinite Beer]

Yeeaaaa

I love it, and its a catchy song also.

Hulalaoo responds:

i am glad that you like

['Arrow to the Knee']

raaaage

A little tear trickled down my cheek. im so fucking sick of skyrim. A beauty.

oh yeh youre gay

psychicpebbles responds:

im only gay for you, luis.

[Skyrim Is Epic]

You animate balls well.

But you need to work on animating nipples a bit more.

psychicpebbles responds:

i'll practice on u

[Waiting for redesign]

pretty accurate

I liked this. I dont know what else to say bout it. I also liked the walk cycle for the castle crasher.

MihaP responds:

Glad you like it .Thanks:PPPP